It was my best friend’s deepest, darkest secret and it would be a hard one to keep. It was a hard one to keep because it was Jorge’s secret that’s he had and the only one he had told was me. Jorge’s secret was about this girl he likes and looks at almost every day. When I look at him to tell me the answers he’s looking at her or just talking to her, but when I tell him to tell her how he feels he gets very nervous. When she graves his arm or at least touches Jorge he gets all sweaty.
One day when I went to school and Jorge was at his locker and I got to my locker I saw him looking at her very secretly. I went up to him and told him “why don’t u go up to her and tell her how u feel” and he said “no” then I told him “why?” then he said “because im nervous that she might say no”. The bell rang. I said “lets got to class” he said “ok”. When we where in the class room I went to talk to the girl that Jorge liked and then I will talk to Jorge about getting with the girl he likes. After we got to talk to both of them I found out that the girl that Jorge liked kind of liked Jorge back. Then I told Jorge that she liked him back.
The next day when we came back to school I toke Jorge to talk to the girl he liked. When I toke him up to her she kind of got scared and red. Even Jorge got red so they started talking and I wasn’t there because I gave them some space so they can talk. When he came back he told me that she said yes and I told him if Jorge knew her nickname and he said spiderpig. The next day I told Jorge if anybody knew if they were going out and he said “no” I said “why not people are going to find out once in a while” he said “I know but don’t tell anybody” and I said “ok I wont tell anybody”. After school Jorge and the girl he was going out with in secret went somewhere nobody was so when they came back Jorge had his hair kind of messed up and he had red lips on his neck but he covered it up by putting his hood on witch covered most of his neck. But there still going out in secrecy
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15 years ago
i like how you make them talk.... but i didnt like you spelling
ReplyDeleteI like your story its funny how jerge nad spiderpig go out secretly..
ReplyDeleteOne thing to make your story better is by telling the readers more about your story and that way they would be more intersting.
*Dalia*
Your story made me laugh. =D
ReplyDeleteBut you need to fix your spelling.