My life changing event was when my uncle got shot and he died. I didnt know why anbody killed him or anything, I didnt know who killed him, and i didnt know with what did they kill him with. The only thing i know is that my mom told me that he cam out of my cuzins house to get something out of h car and all of a suden my cuzins heard a gun shot. So they went out side and they found him on the floor bleeding from his chest. But to me he was my module because he could sing mexican songs and other songs very well and he was ditermined to keep singing. Now the things i have to remmember him is his videos about him when he was singing to my cuzins when we were having a party.
That even changed me a lot because first it changed the way i felt when i did things. Then it changed the way i do my work. it also changed the way i look at things. It changed the way i did things because when i was a little boy i always went along with anything other people said like when they told me to get things that wernt mine and to break my cuzins stuff. Now i think if its going to kill me or if im going to get in trouble for it and when i think it through i make the right choses.
It changed how i did my work by the way i was thinking how my uncle was ditermined on what he was trying to do his work. Then i toke that advice he was doing and i tryed my best to do a lot of things like if my mom tells me to get my grades up. I do it because my mom tells me to try my best and when i look at her i think about my uncle saying to do my best. Now im atualy trying to do my work and get my grades up so i can go to high school and go to college get a good job and live my life trying as hard as i can.
It also changed the way i look at things. When i look at a girl i dont think shes judt a girl that i can kiss or have sex with but i look at here and i see how she feels and how we could have a good relationship but without all that drama going on with other people like they didnt want a baby or that the girls or the men are cheatng on them. I dont think about any stuff like that i think about having a good life and what evrything to come in the future. This is why i chose this life changing event to write my little story about.
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15 years ago
Nice essay and Sorry about your loss. Oh and...... have you ever heard of spellcheck?
ReplyDeleteIt's a good story, I think you should've been more clear on the examples you gave. You also have spelling errors.
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