a story is worth a thousand words

I am the man in the shadows my name is nick and i am getting some sauce so i can put it on the pie so it gives it the extra flavor that i like. There is 6 people and 1 dog living in the house and also working in the farm. The dogs name is Jose witch we call chavela. In this time we are going to eat dinner and the desert is pumpkin pie. after we eat dinner we also have desert and it smells so good that even if its not in your mouth you can still taste it. and the best part is the crust because its crunchy and very good tasting. My doughtier Dalia looks at my wife and sees that she is feeding the horse some pie so she wants to give some pie to the horse. The horses name is Armando he loves to eat a lot But the house is rubbing the pie in Jose's face because he is starving and probably of jumping on the table and getting the pie there. The bread on the table is called bimbo that is made by us. Then there is the two little kids that are there are Jorge witch is eating like there's no tomorrow and Luis who is probably thinking very happy thoughts because hes always thinking of the toy that is right in front of him. My grandma that i probably making something out of wood at the table is Alma. Then finally the wife is Sandra witch i am married to.
We are all eating as a family, eating the pumpkin pie that i have been waiting for all day. But my kids, my wife, the horse, and my grandma eat all the pie and left a little peace just sitting there and when i picked it up to eat it the Jose, the dog jumped up and toke the peace of pie right out of my hand. I got mad and throw Jose out of the house for a while. Then when we where outside working on the farm we all where but not my grandma but when Jose and Armando were mad at each other and Jose bit Armando "the horse" in the tail so Armando went crazy and Sandra was there. As she was watching the horse go crazy and she tryed to stop him but Armando kicked her in her face and she died right there.

Pet peeves

1. I hate the screeh on metal
2. I hate ballhoges when were playing basketball
3. I hate people calling me over and over agian
4. I hate pencils screeh on tables
5. I hate losing a sport or a bet
6. I hate people when they dont trust me
7. I hate when people win and rub it in your face
8. I hate people screaming at me
9. I hate people being loud and noisy
10. I hate people that think there bigger and bader than others
11. I hate people swearing at me
12. I hate being hot like in the summer
13. I hate school
14. I hate when my bird screams a lot
15. I hate people when i tell then to do something an they do it wrong
16. I hate lires
17. I hate people truning off the computer when im on it
18. I hate when people have more stuff then me
19. I hate when people hit me
20. I hate when people throw stuff at me
21. I hate when people cup check me
22. I hate people telling me wht to do
23. I hate when people start singing out of no where
24. i hate when people talk to me when im pissed off
25. I hate when other people take the better food

the secret

It was my best friend’s deepest, darkest secret and it would be a hard one to keep. It was a hard one to keep because it was Jorge’s secret that’s he had and the only one he had told was me. Jorge’s secret was about this girl he likes and looks at almost every day. When I look at him to tell me the answers he’s looking at her or just talking to her, but when I tell him to tell her how he feels he gets very nervous. When she graves his arm or at least touches Jorge he gets all sweaty.
One day when I went to school and Jorge was at his locker and I got to my locker I saw him looking at her very secretly. I went up to him and told him “why don’t u go up to her and tell her how u feel” and he said “no” then I told him “why?” then he said “because im nervous that she might say no”. The bell rang. I said “lets got to class” he said “ok”. When we where in the class room I went to talk to the girl that Jorge liked and then I will talk to Jorge about getting with the girl he likes. After we got to talk to both of them I found out that the girl that Jorge liked kind of liked Jorge back. Then I told Jorge that she liked him back.
The next day when we came back to school I toke Jorge to talk to the girl he liked. When I toke him up to her she kind of got scared and red. Even Jorge got red so they started talking and I wasn’t there because I gave them some space so they can talk. When he came back he told me that she said yes and I told him if Jorge knew her nickname and he said spiderpig. The next day I told Jorge if anybody knew if they were going out and he said “no” I said “why not people are going to find out once in a while” he said “I know but don’t tell anybody” and I said “ok I wont tell anybody”. After school Jorge and the girl he was going out with in secret went somewhere nobody was so when they came back Jorge had his hair kind of messed up and he had red lips on his neck but he covered it up by putting his hood on witch covered most of his neck. But there still going out in secrecy

Her Mysterious Death

Her Death was due to mysterious circumstances and I was assigned to the case. I didn’t want to do this case but I was forced to do it because I needed more money to get my own car and if I didn’t do It I would get fired. Then I told my wife that I will be gone for a little bit. So I got into my wife’s car and left. But when I was going to the murder scene I didn’t see any houses around so I thought to myself that it would have been a easy case. Then when I got to the crime scene I saw a house just at the peak of a hill.
Then when I looked at the place were the woman got murdered I saw a track of blood going down the hill leading to some place else and just at the beginning I saw a pocket knife with blood on it.
When I knocked on the house door a man opened up the door and I told him that I was there to look around the house because of the mysterious woman’s death. He let me in and I started to ask the man some questions. I told him “ what’s your name” he said “Jorge”. Then I told him what was “how many people live in this house” the man said “Just me my wife and kids” then I told him “how many kids” he said “just two”. I told him “what was his wife’s name and his kids names” he said “my wife’s name is Sandra and my kids names is Luis and the my other son is Jose. When I told him did anybody from his family die and he said no. He looked worried in some way because when he said no his voice change a bit. I asked him who got killed then, he said “There was a woman at the door she said that she got lost from a group from a camp site witch I think is miles from here because there is no camp site in this area” Then I went to his wife and told here who died and she said the something so I knew that they weren’t lying.
Then I told them how did the woman die, They said “my wife and me heard a scream come from outside we ran outside and they saw the woman’s arm get dragged from behind the bushes”. I told them “when the woman knocked on the door where did she go” they said “outside to the lake” When I went outside to look at the blood trail I followed it and I ended up beside the lake.
The trial of blood ended up going into a lake. But right before the blood trial ended there was a sharp tooth but it didn’t look like it was from a wolf or a bear or anything that is normal. So I went to my wife’s car and pulled out my computer that I use and I tried looking up every single tooth that ever existed and there was no such tooth that I found besides that lake. When I was trying to look the tooth up I saw something move from the bushes to the lake and I looked very close and I saw something big move and it went away. When I tried looking for it in the lake the only thing that I found was crab shells some dead fish and living fish and a whole lot of rocks. So I never found what happened to the woman that died but I still think that there is something in the lake that killed here. It might be the man or the woman but the evidence that I found didn’t match anything that cam from them but the only thing that I have found was that very sharp skinny saw like tooth.

how to make logandale better

I think that logandale need a lot of improvements in the school to Make it a better place.My first reason is that we need better food in the lunchroom. My second reason is that we need to get some free time between our class time. My last reason is that the school needs to have better teachers that make kids actually do there homework. If you were to decide what the schools should change what would it be?
My first reason is that we need better food in the lunchroom. We need better food because so of us need more food than others. The 8th rgraders get all the bad food but all the 6th and the 7th graders get some good food. We need some good food to, so we can be healthy and ready
to learn. We need good food to be healthy.
My second reason is that we need to get some free time between our class time. We need some free time to talk about ether something we don’t get or something we need to ask. Some of us need to go on the commuters and play some games so we can have fun but the school has something that lets you see the students computer and control them or block them from the internet. Then there is some stuff that guys or girls need to talk about like if someone wants to fight someone then they have to talk about it so they can see if there going to fight or not. Having somebody look at our computers makes it look like they are seeing use changing our clothes.
My last reason is that schools need to have better teachers that get kids to do there actual homework. Sometimes teachers tell kids how to do there homework, But they teach it in a 8th grade level and the kids are in 7th or 6th grade. When they don’t get it or make it fun and exciting, they come to a place were they want to copy off someone who is smart and did there homework. That’s why when teachers look at there homework they see the same wrong answers on the same papers. That’s why the teachers need to get the kids into doing there homework.
I think that logandale need a lot of improvements in the school to make it a better place. My first reason is that we need better food in the lunchroom. My second reason is that we need to get some free time between our class time. My last reason is that the school needs to have better teachers that make kids actually do there homework. These are my three reasons how the school can be improved to make it a better place for kids in logandale.